Soy and Wasabi

blue ceramic dish,
last nights soy and wasabi
still stings the eyes

7 Comments

Ben Naga says:

24/07/2019 at 11:06 am

A STALE START

Here we are it seems
Stained with yesterday’s remains
Dazed and misty-eyed

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1. Buddhadoshā says:
  
  24/07/2019 at 12:36 pm
  
  😋
  
  mist stale in the eyes,
  honey bee settles upon
  aspen leaf
  
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  1. Ben Naga says:
    
    24/07/2019 at 3:00 pm
    
    You’re far closer to true haiku and nicely fashioned. Kudos.
    
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    1. Buddhadoshā says:
      
      24/07/2019 at 4:30 pm
      
      ah, I liked yours a lot! very fun to play off each other like that.
    2. Ben Naga says:
      
      24/07/2019 at 4:35 pm
      
      Thank you. Yes. An ancient practice, I believe. 🙂
    3. Buddhadoshā says:
      
      24/07/2019 at 7:47 pm
      
      And thank you! 😊
    4. Ben Naga says:
      
      25/07/2019 at 4:30 am
      
      🙂

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